There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need
music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the
International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
The existence of various type of music in different countries is obvious. in other words different people do not have an equal tendency for listening to the special kind of music .as point of my view we need music for dancing, relaxing and doing sports . each kind of music is suitable for particular activity so I think we cannot certainly talk about merits and demerits of traditional or modern music.
Dancing in parties is becoming one of the important points of entertainments. People gathered together to meet each other and after some hours they prefer to dance with a high level of energy so, in my view traditional music could not be appropriate for this kind of activities. In other words dancing need modern music with high level of energy the same as the kind which teenagers like.
Relaxing is a type of activities which need traditional and mellow music. Traditional music specially the ones in my country have nice rhythm with meaningful melodies which makes people calm and peaceful.
Doing sport such as running or walking is a kind of activities which needs music but it depends on the people taste. Young people may like listening to modern music to become more motivated for doing sports or some people like music with meaningful melody to help them feeling better.
Generally , different type of music is useful for different people with different taste or tendency. People listen to music in order to doing some activities such as dancing, doing sport or relaxing.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'i think', 'kind of', 'such as', 'in my view', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275092936803 0.247107183377 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.152416356877 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.126394052045 0.0946595960268 134% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0408921933086 0.0501214627716 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0334572490706 0.0437548338989 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.148698884758 0.122226691241 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0557620817844 0.0403226058552 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55674335315 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0297397769517 0.0326793684256 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0631970260223 0.0861772015684 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0111524163569 0.021408717616 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0148698884758 0.011925033212 125% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1496.0 1933.35771543 77% => OK
No of words: 254.0 316.048096192 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88976377953 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326771653543 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.216535433071 0.28420135186 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173228346457 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122047244094 0.137316102897 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55674335315 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.037074148 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.56093040696 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.9502742579 60.7387585426 77% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1666666667 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0347921485 49.517814964 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 127.492653851 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.814263465372 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 42.8202099738 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 2.11475409836 1.69124875643 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383473893879 0.332605444948 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.139816925266 0.102741220458 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0592228139311 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.662962988903 0.534860350844 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0847502264949 0.148594505496 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203891639599 0.134430193775 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802360191105 0.0742795772207 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.355046260622 0.324371583561 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.116427298296 0.0638462369009 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259304315633 0.228012699653 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795125761232 0.058150111329 137% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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