There is certainly a difference in thoughts ideas and actions between children their parents and grandparents Why do these differences exist Does it cause problems in your community in your opinion

The worldview of older generations, younger generations are different, why does this difference exist? This essay will examine the causes of different views, from my perspective, this worldview's difference in my society does not cause great issues due to the loyalty of the people.
It seems undeniable that nowadays the changeable world has had a great impacts on shaping personality, compared to the past, human life poses more demands for obedience, responsibilities , a person should adopt to world's conditions . It is worth remarking that youngsters are more flexible to adjusting some situation, adults are more stubborn to alter their point of views, habits because of years of experience and failures . Moreover, adults deserve some positions in society, have financial stability, independence which allow to be confident in their future,so, instead of motivating ambitions to improve their worldviews to move the world, they opt calm lives without disturbing causes, in comparison to young people who search opportunities to achieve beneficial outcomes, who aim to make countless efforts to acquire an unpredictable result. In addition, there are no doubts that cognitive abilities of adolescents are higher than elderly persons, so their knowledge contribute personality development much higher. Furthermore, youngsters have a major circle of friends who motivate, encourage, aid, support, affect them, they desire to be similar to famous individuals, they challenge world's difficulties making a lot of efforts, tackling overcoming tasks, as a result, these activities assist to shaping personalities. Therefore, younger people are more adaptive to the surrounding environment than old people, altering their character traits smoothly, thus their views are different.
It is pointless to claim that our community has global issues because parents, grandparents, youths have different ideas and actions. If parents did not pay lots attention to parenting offspring, children would not be loyalty to elderly people. Nevertheless, parents in my country carry out their duties, strive to ensure advanced financial circumstance for toddlers, resulting in an increase the quality of parenting. Because of parenting, children, parents, grandparents understand each other, and do not aim to create burdens one to another. As a result, education of rising generation requires to be loyalty to older persons, given that our country have not detrimental problems between adults and youths.
In conclusion, the modern world provoking people change their worldviews, however, children are more flexible to accept new conditions than parents, they accept it, changing the worldviews, so their ideas, action are distinguished. Different worldviews do not cause adverse problems due to person's loyalty to each other.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2394.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74100719424 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06769429691 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613908872902 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.2619961327 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.6 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205190034502 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709685705677 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562246924516 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136723146224 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555641045966 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 78.4519038076 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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