There is a problem today that copyright materials such as music, films and books are freely available on the internet with the results that the owners of the works lose money. Do you feel that this is a good or bad thing?
In today’s world, materials like music, films, books etc are being copied and are freely available on the internet. Whether this is a good thing or a bad thing depends on the advantages and disadvantages of having all these materials readily available on the internet for people to access.
The main advantages, in my opinion, is that the internet provides a one-stop shop for meeting peoples requirements. People can access all these materials, depending on their interests, from the comfort of their homes. This not only keeps them engaged but also helps in enhancing their knowledge. After all “An empty brain is a devil’s workshop.” Some of these materials act as inspiration to youngsters and by using their creativity and capabilities, they may create a unique material that may either result in a future career or become a source of revenue for them.
The disadvantages of having all these materials readily available on the internet are numerous and depend on how these materials are used. Firstly, some of these materials are a source of revenue for the person owning the copyright and the potential to earn maximum revenue is curtailed as people can access these on the internet without a charge. Secondly, the easy accessibility also makes these materials vulnerable to mis-use and the risk of being copied. The originality and efforts of the person owning the copyright is thus threatened.
Based on the above, I am of the opinion that it is not a bad thing for these materials to be readily available on the internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...or become a source of revenue for them. The disadvantages of having all these ma...
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...o be readily available on the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, thus, after all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00778210117 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82695469524 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505836575875 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.577015454 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204232432403 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915753411443 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818024660616 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16443427396 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103056835895 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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