These days with advances in technology more and more people are working from home. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion.
In today’s futuristic world, with the advancement in computer technologies, work from home is possible. I will discuss positive and negative aspects of this development in subsequent paragraphs, my opinion, however, lean towards the benefits.
Coming toward consequences this change might bring, firstly, team work is merely involved. The mitigation of workspace creates communication gaps between people working in same department as reports and files are shared through bridge, for instance, emails; making process uncoordinated. Secondly, Hiring process will be challenging. This means that if persons are hired to free-lanced, the authenticity of work would be challenged as it increase chances of fraud. To exemplify, all free-lancing websites and firms have to go through complete background checks before uploading the profiles on internet for contact with general public, yet still some deception cases are reported everyday as per the article published in Time magazine.
While presenting positive outcomes, firstly, topic in discussion bring convenience. This means that working from home is undemanding as it eliminate the need to travel to workplace which not only consume considerable amount of time but also cause physical stress. For example, woman with infants can work while taking care of their children. Secondly, dull office setup is dispensable and worker can perform from comfortable environment of home. This thing has considerable effect on mental creativity and speed confirmed by the survey performed by United Nations in life quality report. Many giant corporations such as Google is minimizing this by provision of home-like workspace to increase creative capabilities of employees.
In conclusion, although there are downsides of this new culture like communication gaps and fraud, however, in my opinion, convenience and stress reduction in work eclipse the drawbacks.
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Comments
Seems improvement to me
Seems improvement to me
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'eliminates'?
Suggestion: eliminates
... working from home is undemanding as it eliminate the need to travel to workplace which n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79078014184 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05046376946 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68085106383 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4005807612 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.642857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207718798393 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672235007907 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441384263262 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128511940124 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511830599371 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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