These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
There is a tendency that the growing number of unemployed husbands are adopting the role of householders. In this essay, I will consider the main reasons for it and the negative impacts this trend has on households.
Let us start with the motivations why some male spouses choose to stay jobless at home with children. The first factor is that mothers do not want to leave their lucrative jobs. Many married women with children refuse to take a maternal leave, because they occupy managerial positions with large salary, which is usually many time higher than that of their spouse. Another reason is that health impairments can hinder fathers from employment. Many men are unable to work due to their disabilities, so they take the responsibility for both the house and the nurture of children. Furthermore, fathers love spending time with their children. Many fathers also are willing to care for their children, so they usually come to an agreement with their wives to get employed alternately.
However, this phenomenon has the following negative sides. Firstly, children cannot enjoy the love of mothers. Children suffer from the absence of maternal care, which plays a significant role in early years, since fathers cannot fully offer it to them. Secondly, the long unemployment of fathers will negatively affect their career prospect. They will find it difficult to return to work, if they have not worked for a long time, as employers would think that they have lost their qualification as well as skills. Moreover, household income will be lower. The families with one bread earner will experience the shortage of money and have to save on food, until both parents go to work.
In conclusion, even though there are many causes why husbands prefer to take a role of householders, this situation also has many drawbacks to families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...time, as employers would think that they have lost their qualification as well as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05901639344 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6487745185 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593442622951 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3215569994 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7647058824 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277216528349 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840135829155 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396810015505 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139539568004 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666816338544 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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