It is observed that from antiquity the impact of male dominance on creating a realm and lead a civilization towards violence and disruptions. Some believe, if women were the leaders in history, our present could be more peaceful. However, In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the forth mentioned statement, leadership in spite of depending on gender is a collaboration of competence behavior.
To embark with, by nature male are strong and strategic, while females are considered as soft and deliberate, although, the leadership requires more inputs like the convincing proficiency, conflict management, decision making, and many more. In fact, the soft appearance of women provides no surety that they can not involve in fearsome battles. In a recent article by prominent "The Times", Queen Victoria of London governed almost half of the world like India, Japan, Australia, and many more, despite being women she marked decades of massacres, and blood stained the pages of history. Consequently, thinking the civilization lead by ladies will bring tranquility with peace is absurd.
On the other hand, regarding the perspective of people, the male is supposed to be arrogant, eventually, according to them the actual complex situations could only be resolved by vim and vigor. Furthermore, their counterparts may take emotional and dramatic conclusions, which stay irrelevant for people imagination. In an empirical survey conducted by London's "Oxford University", which ascertained that around fifty-five percent of women have equal brutal and vicious mental psychology as men. Certainly, the stereotype image of men as fierce one and women as caring and vulnerable is being challenged.
To conclude, history is been driven by the self-experiences and ideas of humankind. leadership is more than gender, it is a competence of charismatic, motivating, convincing, and several other skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...decision making, and many more. In fact, the soft appearance of women provides no...
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... India, Japan, Australia, and many more, despite being women she marked decades o...
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Suggestion: Leadership
...elf-experiences and ideas of humankind. leadership is more than gender, it is a competence...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, while, in fact, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60824742268 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20836712115 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670103092784 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8954897318 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.538461538 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214587705842 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613581801127 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641485500967 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10934415361 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672524299024 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.86 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.