Tourists find it very exciting to travel places with extreme conditions. The benefits of such a visit may enrich a nature lover with an immense sense of adventure and adrenalin rush. However, such trips can endanger one’s life. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages in the form of threats that tourist may experience while visiting places like the Antarctic or the Sahara Desert.
A tourist may fill themselves with profound pleasure and self- satisfaction in such trips where the conditions are not favorable to lead a normal life. People get bored and tired with normal day to day activities and they want to experience the thrill and excitement inside them. They try to find inner peace and self -satisfaction of achieving something big by traveling and witness such places where common people generally do not go. For example, many documentaries in Discovery Channel encourages us to break the normal routine and experience the beautiful nature with the critical climatic conditions. Being trapped in normal life, a tourist gets the benefit of achieving a sense of energy refill so that they can start with the normal routine after the trip.
Sometime one may not only look for excitement and thrill in such conditions. Without proper medical checkup and survival tactics, one may lost their lives in such conditions. The climate in Sahara and Antarctic are very unpredictable and without proper alternatives and guidance, one should not go to risk their lives for the rest of the future. For example, tourists getting collapsed have been reported across the year due to negligence of safety. Though such places may satisfy a sense of thrill and excitement but one should not risk their lives in such conditions.
Nowadays, tourists visiting places with difficult conditions have been increasingly popular. Though such places enrich one with thrill and rush but throws into the danger of risking own lives. This essay discussed that what tourists may faces in the form of benefits and drawbacks while travel to such extreme conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18805970149 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65938822552 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498507462687 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4490448705 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.235294118 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32431534322 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114299465041 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731526540624 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228644769776 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086691685559 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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