Modern world is equipped with latest technologies and advancements and people want everything served in front of them. Young generation prefer to buy goods from e-commerce websites and they find it really enchanting. The rationale of this essay is to shed light on certain precursors that actuate people to buy goods online and demerits of this phenomenon.
To commence with, the root cause behind this unwelcome trend is that youngsters prefer doing things that can be done in easy and smooth way. They remain glued to screens of gadgets and keep on searching goods and spend money on redundant things. Modern people choose online shopping as it is the easiest way things can be delivered at our doorstep. Moreover, we can pay whenever we recieve the product. Enchanting advertisements and jaw dropping deals abet kids to spend money needlessly. Additionally, by schemes like easy monthly instalments banks allure people to buy expensive things.
The major reason behind this trend is lifestyle of young generation. Youngsters have become legarthic and lead a sedentary life. Individuals these days look for shortcuts and easy way outs. It has caused severe impact on earning of local vendors. Business of street shops and vendors has dropped significantly. A recent study has revealed that by going to shopping helps to rejuvenate our mind. So, this trend should be reversed and certain steps ought to be taken.
In the conclusion, having discussed this topic in detail, i believe that lifestyle of people is the major culprit behind this unwelcome trend. This scenario should be restricted till certain limits as it is making people sluggish and dull.
- Some products can be made quickly by a machine Other items take a long time to be made by hand As a buyer which do you prefer and why Give specific details and examples in your answer 78
- Fast food is a part of life in some places Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet Do you agree or disagree 90
- Today more people are shopping online than ever before Why do people choose to shop in this way Are there disadvantages to shopping online Provide your opinion and use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 61
- Today more people are shopping online than ever before Why do people choose to shop in this way Are there disadvantages to shopping online Provide your opinion and use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 91
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
Modern world is equipped with latest technologies and advancements and peopl...
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Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... having discussed this topic in detail, i believe that lifestyle of people is the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18587360595 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69422621694 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8262140644 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9444444444 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197990148288 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556871582567 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610648294796 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115002706155 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126518238937 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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