Today more people are travelling than ever before.
Why is this the case?
What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler.
The trend of travelling is becoming increasingly popular among more and more people today. There is a plethora of reasons behind this increase in the number of people travelling. However, it has several advantages, such as flexibility, business opportunity, and new employment options available at long distances.
To begin with, the main reason behind this is an advancement in the public transportation system. This advancement leads to many travel options, such as buses, trains, and flights. Another reason behind this rise in commutation is the financial growth and strong economies, and it is helping people to earn a huge amount of money, which they prefer to spend on travelling. Lastly, people have become more enthusiastic about exploring new places like foreign countries, hill stations, and sea beaches. Therefore, people are more focused on visiting new places rather than sitting ideal at home nowadays.
Furthermore, there are many benefits of travelling among people. Firstly, they feel really happy when they explore new places, they are able to do this due to the flexibility to travel around the world. This also provides them an opportunity to meet new people. Secondly, they can travel to other demographic areas to expand their businesses. It helps them to earn more and more money in a shorter period of time. Last but not least, it provides freedom while searching for a new job in other countries, where they can get jobs easily in their profession, especially in the area of technology. Many professional executives, for instance, travel very frequently for their business-related reasons. So, travelling to new places provide numerous opportunities for people which is why it has risen in the last few years.
To sum up, nowadays, more and more people are travelling on a daily basis for their business-related reasons. The technological advancement in the public transportation system leads to this steep rise in the number of travellers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 399, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32165605096 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0188462355 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550955414013 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2465741265 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316255175012 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104738980285 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741633761481 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199422852461 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224025189079 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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