Today more people are travelling than ever before.
Why is this case?
What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
Nowadays, the world is becoming sharply developed, which leads to a better life. Besides, having more free time also increases the need for entertainment of people and one of the useful ways for everyone to relax is travelling. That's why more and more people today spend their time travelling than ever before. This habit of travelling results from some reasons and simultaneously gives us many benefits.
To begin with the case of travelling is that people travel to relax and have a good time after a hard-working day. We often go with our friends, families or neighbors to share regardless of happiness and excitement to each other. Moreover, there is no doubt about that we don't need to worry about our work, study or other matters. Therefore, just going somewhere for a few days, it'll be easy for us to entertain and find out privacy and peace for our own. What's more? People travel because of the desire of widening knowledge. Whenever they visit, there will be something new and interesting for us to discover. The further we go, the better we know about the world, people and their lifestyle. For instance, when we visit a pagoda, we'll be able to know much about the history, geography and so on.
The reasons of travelling are still so long that almost no one has ability to tell all and its benefits are, too. Travelling is really advantageous to everybody. The first benefit is that travellers will feel much more comfortable and relaxed, in particular after a hard-working week. Talking with friends, families, for example, can give us more courage and good feelings to be ready for the next duty. As a consequence, the result at work and at school will be developed considerably, which is very useful for our future. Furthermore, travelling also helps us to gather a lot of necessary information about all fields such as History, Geography, Literature and many more. This information can be easily applied in the real life, which can make our lives as well as our world much better. Moreover, travelling also gives us the amount of interesting experience, which helps us improve our social skills and widen our relationship with people around the world. However, travelling should depend on our financial situation. Don't spend too much time and money on travelling when we still have some debts. Besides, despite many benefits, it also gives us some serious disadvantages, especially to our environment. Many travellers are not aware of keeping the places they have visited clean. They litter everywhere from the streets to beaches. This affects seriously not only to the lives of residents there but also the view of the city, which is not attractive to visitors both domestic and international.
In general, that more and more people now travel than ever before has both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, all of us should be smart traveller who know to relax, widen knowledge after every visit, also know to keep the environment clean to take to image of our country to foreigners all over the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in general, in particular, no doubt, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2517.0 1615.20841683 156% => OK
No of words: 513.0 315.596192385 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90643274854 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73462948496 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510721247563 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 800.1 506.74238477 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0713988222 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8928571429 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3214285714 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385582613486 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115260871262 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114183012443 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26274435601 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701252626918 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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