Today, most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger
Is it a positive or negative development?
To what extent do you support this development?
Nowadays, majority of individuals marry and have babies in their thirties rather than at younger age. Although I believe this is a positive development because of some advantages such as, career growth and financial freedom, the contentious issue of infertility is a cause for concern, and for this reason, I entirely disagree with this development.
Late marriage and birth are beneficial to the couples in some ways. First and foremost, the couples will be able to develop their career path. Before marriage, there would be enough time to focus on academic career which may define the path to success. A final point to consider relates to financial freedom. Since the individuals might have been able to acquire jobs and establish their positions in the labour market, they may have steady income which would serve as source of finance for the family. For instance, most of my colleagues at Lanny Exports Limited who developed their careers for three decades before marriage claimed they could afford the financial responsibilities. That is to say, marrying around the age of thirties is quite positive.
However, a female could have difficulties giving birth in her thirties due to infertility. Actually, as a woman grow older, her chances of getting pregnant reduces. Afterall, science has proven that most females' reproductive organs are usually more fertile at younger age. Now, of what benefit will it be for an individual to get married and, perhaps, not give birth?
In conclusion, despite the fact that getting married in the thirties will enable the couples take their time to execute the career plans, infertility is a risk that cannot be taken. In my opinion, late marriage is a positive development but I completely disagree with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16433566434 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72392882684 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2350130503 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257328270604 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792180249113 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485808070915 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157404906066 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020235989708 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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