Today, most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather
than when they are younger. Is it a positive or negative development in your
opinion? To what extent do you support this development?
Nowadays, the majority of individuals marry and have babies in their thirties rather than twenties. Although some people believe that this is a positive point, others have a dissenting opinion. In my opinion, this development has drawbacks which will be listed below.
To begin with, mature couples have the financial stability that allows them to build a better future for their dependents, but they do not have the sufficient energy. In other words, when the parents hit the mid-thirties, they have enough budget for their children and good positions in the career path, however, the energy rate decreases to raise their juniors. For example, in Egypt, late marriage is a trend in the meantime because of inflation and high prices. Another example is a research paper published by UNICEF, it shed light upon the importance of parents’ physical abilities in building future leaders. Consequently, the media should participate in awareness campaigns to encourage future generations to marry an early age.
Moreover, the generation gap is a disaster. If the age difference between family individuals is more than thirty years, this will lead to some problems. A prime example is the current generation is listening to hip-hop music which is a kind of loud music, but their guardians prefer old fashion music. In addition to this, as soon as there is poor communication between old parents and their children, misunderstanding appears and this will raise many obstacles like youth-crimes. Thus, awareness sessions by the psychologists should be given to the both of them to decrease the expected crisis.
In conclusion, although the financial stability and experience are important to the marriage, the age difference between family members is an inevitable aspect. I think early marriage has many advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34494773519 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91567061511 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8878107681 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.266666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177967949407 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537558891506 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576833768611 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105709958116 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943354574666 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.