Too many people do not know their neighbors in large cities.
What problems does it cause?
What can be done about this?
It is true that in today’s way of living in metropolitans, a large number of people are unknown to their neighbors. Although this phenomenon is believed to have certain negative effects on city life, neighbors themselves can come forward with viable solutions to address the situation effectively.
On the flip side, the damaging impacts of not knowing the neighbors should be noted. As a matter of fact, the more you have communication with your neighbors, the higher chances are to feel free to demand their assistance in the face of difficulties. It simply means that those ones who make contact with the people living in their building might be counted on when an emergency appears to help each other. Since many could have moved to megacities from far-flung areas in search of better life conditioning, they, in turn, would be newcomers with no information about their surroundings and local people. Thus, there might be some people who would prefer not to be close to their neighbors; however, it can be problematic.
Having said that, some ordinary steps can be taken to make sure that the negative aspects are kept at bay. Firstly, having a building convention on a regular basis, these meetings for the ones who reside there can develop a friendship throughout the sessions. Another solution to this matter, especially for the newcomers, can hold a party and invite other residents. This, as a result, would build up trust and closeness among the neighbors.
In conclusion, owing to the fact that manifold aspects of rural life are negatively affected by being total strangers to the neighbors, having regular meetings with all the residents of the building could curb the tide.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...today’s way of living in metropolitans, a large number of people are unknown to their neighbors. ...
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Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: THESE_ONES[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'those' instead.
Suggestion: those
...e of difficulties. It simply means that those ones who make contact with the people living...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03202846975 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73698566645 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604982206406 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8490941247 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203932547575 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771212888872 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445348600012 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114491858772 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641369233354 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.