True friends should always support each other’s decisions.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Something that every one of us will agree about is that all of us need at least one friend. While some people believe that it is not necessary that friend should always be supportive to our decision, I agree with the statement.
There are some people who think they don’t need support from anybody. However, I think it is sign of overconfidence, and such attitude may lead us to dangerous consequences. For instance, during our school life, one of our classmates used to find faults in others decision. We stopped sharing our decision and talking with him. Although he was successful to score high in our board exam, without discussing with us, he chose a wrong subject for his bachelors. As a result, he failed to finish his bachelor degree.
Acceptance and appreciation from a friend not only motivates us but also strengthen the bonding of friendship. First of all, when we do not get acceptance, we feel lonely. Consequently, loneliness not only not makes us only sad, but may affect our mental well being. Additionally, we need appreciation to develop a sense of achievement, which inspires us to face future challenges. For example, whatever success I have achieved today is because of the encouragement that I have received from my best friend; same is true for him also. Despite the fact that sometimes we criticise others decision, we never disrespect other decision. Moreover, his supportive attitude gives me a huge space to express my thoughts and decision to him.
In conclusion, instead of being overconfident and finding faults in others decision, I believe it is always the best idea to discuss with someone and find a friend who can support, appreciate our decision and give some space to express ourselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...om my best friend; same is true for him also. Despite the fact that sometimes we cri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98281786942 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89433588948 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1130091409 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140714432818 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442331846959 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501478443191 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989499479601 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474160965697 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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