Violent news stories should not be shown on television and newspapers because they promote violence.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the print and electronic media is a great source of getting information. Sometimes, these two medium, use different tactics to increase their ratings, and ferocious stories are the best way to engage the audience. It is widely believed, that vicious stories, broadcasted by the newspaper and television actually encourages more crimes in the society. I strongly agreed with this point of view, as I opine that such content should not be shown to public as it increases tension and insecurity among the people and give new criminal ideas to the youngsters.
The first and the most worth mentioning point is that, terrorizing content, publish in the Newspaper and telecast on TV channels, incline the individual towards crime. This is because, the effect of media is so strong and it fosters the youngsters to everyday crimes like robbery, rape, shooting, snatching etc. The digital and paper media coverage put more emphases to make the stories more glamorous to attract the juveniles to experience same situation. To illustrate, the survey by Social Welfare of USA, interviewed the young people in jails, and the most of them answered that they were influenced by the media programs.
Another reason to stop the savage broadcast is that, showing the violence on Television means making individuals depress and create sense of insecurity. It is observed that people are experiencing an increased sense of paranoia, insecurity and mistrust. Such kind of news makes people feel frightened and concerned about their own safety and also the safety of their families and friends.The recent survey has shown the statistics that 80% of housewives, in the developing countries, are avid of watching crime stories on TV and went in depression because they might think they would be the next prey of same situations.
To conclude, I am of the opinion, that violent content on both major mediums, should not be published as it create fear and safety concerns as well as promote more crimes by giving people advance criminal ideas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, so, well, as to, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15709969789 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73014179282 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586102719033 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2849891551 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.25 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164099309609 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467018146856 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436174941221 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095202293743 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314634746576 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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