Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more prons to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
Everyone wants to live in comfort. Some individuals find it convenient to live in independent houses, whilst others choose modern apartments the best place to live in. Therefore, I believe that both types of accommodations have some merits and demerit side by side. Though, separate houses give self- satisfaction of ownership yet personally, I am in favour of living in a modern suite because it offers plentiful amenities and the best security system which, unfortunately, large houses are deprived of.
To start with, residing in an apartment brings many facilities which can be enjoyed within the specific paying amount. In this modern era, nuclear family system is growing in trend and almost every family member is tended to earn. Thus, modern condos normally have house - keeping facility which is really handful for working women. Furthermore, apartments offer luxury amenities like swimming pool, gym and allotted parking as well. Usually, it can be seen that such kind of accommodation are cheaper than that of individual houses because all the maintenances expenses are included in the monthly rent. However, in private houses the home owners have to bear everything.
Additionally, there is another significant advantage of luxury apartment is that it provides gated security which is the most important factor. For instance, mostly these apartments have access cards and specific number for vehicles in order to be recognized by the building managements. The visitors and outsides need to go through security checking and ask permission to enter in the building. This security system is lack in private residencies.
To conclude, there are pros and cons of modern condos and independent homes. As far as, houses give a person more freedom and spacious space but this option is sometimes more expensive and less secure. However, apartments offer many other attractions along with residency.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'housed'.
Suggestion: housed
...earn. Thus, modern condos normally have house - keeping facility which is really hand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, really, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, kind of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79691602723 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6533264835 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6470588235 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222391291154 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613936490275 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071161824871 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120100005858 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080296807844 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.