Wealth doesn't necessarily guaranty happiness to what extent do you agree with this statement.
i think i don't agree with this statement that money doesn't need for the happiness in your life.Money is the essence of every one life. Without money a person cannot do anything in the world either a happiness or enjoying a wonderful movements.
Money is everything in the world . If we talk about the basic necessities for every person is the food,shelter and clothing.For getting these thing there is a need of money.If we don't have the money for buying the basic need we cannot make our-self happy.
Secondly now a days for anyone there is also become the need of education. For achieving an education we need a huge amount of money for satisfying out happiness.As the trend is changing day by day in today's era all the things starts with the money and ends with money.because of new technological advancement in a society there is diverging in trends is due to the reason of money.
Thirdly if we want to die or we are dying and leaving this world . For putting ourselves into the graveyard there is a primarily need of the money.We don't have the money even for this we cannot even fulfill the responsibility which everyone has to go in the other world.
Fourthly if we are entering into world which means that a person born and open the eye into this world . There is a need of money as as he takes breath.
Fifthly money is the true happiness of every human of society. If we talk about education we get the for getting the good money in future. Our main purpose in life is to earn money and if we don't have any religion we think that we are here for the money because we know that for getting our dreams and achieving goals there is a requirement of money.
Money has become a soul of everyone in the society which we have to accept that money is the true happiness of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44680851064 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50731800181 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440729483283 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.283205663 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0630649561399 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341279443095 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448362860277 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0469452465536 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553812984083 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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