Wealthy should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disaster. Do you agree or disagree.
The countries that are underdeveloped are expected to receive support in the form of charity from richer countries when they are struck with any natural calamities. This essay agrees with this statement firstly because people have to be rescued who are close to death and secondly to rebuild the city that id destroyed due to the natural disaster.
Life of people is in danger when they experience the undesirable changes in nature. Life seems to be miserable as they might end up starving for days together even without a drop of water to drink and shelter to stay. In such a situation, these people can be helped by the richer nations by providing them with basic necessities of life medical aid . For instance, recently China had provided help to Nigerians who were devastated by earthquake.
The cities that have been destructed can be renovated and a new plan of building the entire city can be possible if the richer countries agrees to sponsor funds. They can also support by providing man power in the form of architectures and engineers who would help in reconstruction of the building and roads that were destroyed. For example, few months back US government had come forward to adopt villages of Indonesia who had experienced great damage due to massive earthquake and helped them in rehabilitating the villages.
In conclusion, I agree that the countries with high economic status should volunteer themselves by providing funds for the nations which requires their support during natural calamities.
- Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment.What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual peopledo? 61
- Some people believe that range of technology available to individuals today is increasing the gap between poor and rich people. Others think it is having an opposite effect.Discuss these points of views. What is your opinion? 73
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign languages is in order to travel to work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...th basic necessities of life medical aid . For instance, recently China had provid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.088 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80790300696 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.5689759222 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.2 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137608290014 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547392276698 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700786330414 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107564384849 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854692665719 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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