What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad
living abroad is very arguable issue between many people especially young generations who’re striving to achieve their dreams. but, many of them particularly who are living in somewhere have poor education system and lack of job opportunities, find the immigration to advance nations is the best solution. generally, immigration like everything has positive and negative impacts. this essay will explore the benefits and drawbacks of studying or working abroad in further detail before coming to conclusion.
Firstly, plethora of advance nations with no doubt, have better work and study opportunities for lots of global individuals. For instance, The United State of America is like a haven for most of students and job seekers worldwide. because it provides massive numbers of well known and qualified universities as well as their market is well prepared to capture and digest huge number of applicants. Secondly, it’s irrefutable that people who travel out their nations will definately acquire more skills. For example, Saudi governments has been running foreign educational program for most of their students since 1980. this program is not only for study purposes , but to deal with other people who are living in advance countries. this action was extremely helpful as it allows them to obtain great experiences. Finally, several of international traders are usually looking for some nations have lower taxes percentage than other. this in fact is a crucial issue for international businessmen as they want to run a lucrative project with minimal expences. Malisia is a great example of international businessmen immigration because of amazing financial previlige such like loans thats giving for investors.
In the contrast, there are indeed many negatives on moving abroad. Fleeting of manpower which affect the provided services is the first drawback of immigration. To illustrate, lebanon is considered as the number one of high immigrants among other nations. this immigration undoubtedly exacerbate the issue and enforce Lebanese authority to find other workers to fill that shortage. this will lead to minimize quality of the provided services. increase the unemployment rate in both host and home countries is another big issue. To elaborate it, Syria and lebanon are neighbour nations. both of them are suffering from very high of unemployment rate but with different reasons. many syrian investors has halted their companies and left into other stable countries to invest. Those companies had many of workers who became unemployed because of this closes. On the other hand, lebanon is very small country which has very limited job opportunities has received many syrian workers who might accept very low wages comparing to local workers. this unfortunately, participate negatively in increasing the unemployment rate there.
In conclusion, moving abroad is very common issue between young people. However, it’s like anything has advantages and disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2544.0 1615.20841683 158% => OK
No of words: 458.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55458515284 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8926637338 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569868995633 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 812.7 506.74238477 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6707307946 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8571428571 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.96428571429 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953875739965 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0256415410892 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348603825278 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726591709534 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342191251454 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 78.4519038076 181% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.