What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?
These days, it is becoming increasingly popular to move to another country to live or study. However, some sociologists claim that this trend not only has a great deal of advantages but also many disadvantages. In this essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of moving to another country and offer my point of view.
Let us start by looking at the benefits of relocating to another country. One of its main positives is a higher salary. Take the USA for example. The majority of people decide to relocate to the USA because they are offered a higher salary in the same job than that of their home country. As a result, if they move to that English-speaking country, they can afford more things such as a house, a car and packaged holidays abroad. Another advantage of relocation to another country is an excellent opportunity to get a better education. Many students choose to study abroad since they get a degree at university with better reputation. As a consequence, when they graduate from university and return home with a degree and good knowledge of foreign languages , they may apply for a well-paid job in an international company.
On the other hand, immigration has plenty of disadvantages. First of all, it often results in homesickness. Most students, who study overseas, are willing to return to their motherland since they miss their relatives and friends. Therefore, if they fail to cope with this problem, they are more likely to come back to home country and miss out the opportunity for a move valuable degree. Secondly, immigrants usually face language barriers. What I mean by this is that once they move to a different country, they tend to encounter linguistic problems, which may cause misunderstanding at work and in daily life until they become fluent in the host language. However, it normally takes much time, effort and patience.
All things considered, even though there are a lot of problems relating to immigration, I think that above-mentioned benefits easily overweigh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i mean, i think, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97329376855 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95228324037 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596439169139 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3066496874 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2105263158 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7368421053 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63157894737 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107172059798 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029890803118 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384310614754 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591130973453 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411596202104 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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