What difficulties will face your country in the next ten years?
Hoe can these problem be overcome?
There is no doubt that every country facing different issues like globalization, political, economic and healthcare etc. But underdeveloped countries are more prone to these problems rather than developed ones. My country is also an underdeveloped country and facing many consequences and from the last few years, these circumstances are getting worse because of the unhealthy government. In this essay, I will discuss the problem and try to give some solutions to these issues.
Firstly, the most significant problem is water that is going to be a big challenge in the coming years. As a result, fields of crops and trees will be dried, and the drinking water will no longer be available so, this will lead to dehydration and starvation. To overcome this problem, the government should plant more trees and make larger reservoirs of water for future to nationwide. Furthermore, industrialization makes the situation worse by contaminating the sea and river with chemicals and from this in further years, health issue arises. the waste of chemicals from industries should be managed by authorities by making rules for them.
Another problem is the unemployment that is rising over the past years and also going to increase in next years. Our youth have no work to do because they do not have a job. The government should encourage or enhance the private sector so that 50% of the youth can be absorbed by them that's how job opportunities will increase and our youth that is our pillars of the nation will not be going to do reckless work. Moreover, our doctors are moving to another country because they do not have opportunities in the country. Therefore, we must provide facilities and create jobs so that, our nation brain serves our country.
To recapitulate, we must take steps about these concerns, so that, in the coming years could be better for our country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01923076923 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87662711582 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544871794872 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4302826869 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247405525412 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806110838617 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051615624774 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139890740155 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473559125013 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.