When families have a meal together it is considered social activity. Do you think eating together is important to people in your country?
It is thought by a significant number of individuals that having food with other members of the family is measured as a social activity. I agree with the nation because having a meal together provides a common platform for every member of the family to raise their concern regarding social and personal matters.
To begin with, eating together with family members is vital as it is the best platform to make relationships strong by understanding each other in different prospects. In today’s competitive life, everybody is committed to fulfilling his or her dream with sparing zero time to talk with others, the dinner table is considered the best place to have a conversation with others by sharing own experience. Which eventually makes strong bonds between family members.
Similarly, we can help each other by discussing their problems during family mealtime. A parent is considered best to guide in different social and personal issues to their children and during mealtime, mostly everyone is mentally free from other tensions, therefore children get an opportunity to discuss their issues easily with parents and come to an appropriate solution. In my country family, mealtimes are considered the most valuable time to discuss all day happening with others and allow the opportunity to have more clarity on each other’s progress.
To conclude, having a meal together on dinner table helps all members of the family to raise strong emotional bond between each other and an opportunity for every member of the family to discuss their concerns related to personal as well as social life. Hence, having a meal together is beneficial for people in the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20295202952 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78780761496 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523985239852 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.159097919 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221553338931 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110242908091 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735733605138 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159267315562 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744542155919 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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