While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
it is debatable that global warming is most crucial environmental issue or deforestation has major impact globally. While I believe that deforestation is equally important problem on the world, I agree that global warming requires more attention at the moment. This essay will first discuss how global warming is more dangerous and crucial problem and later will discuss how deforestation issue can be taken care of before moving on to conclusion.
First of all, there is a high risk that earth will be destroyed in few years because of the rising global warming issues. The glaciers are melting around the world, the pollution is increasing rapidly, wildlife is on the verge of losing their existence and unpredictable weather conditions are the signs of imbalance of ecosystems. If these issues would not be resolved immediately then human existence on the earth will be history. Moreover, recently scientists have done the research in the UK on remaining amount of time before the devastation of earth and it is approximately 50 years more. So, this is the major threat for everyone globally.
However, deforestation is part of ecosystem as well and it also affects global warming indirectly. But, deforestation is mostly happened due to lack of human responsibilities and awareness. To resolve this more campaigns could be arranged to spread awareness regarding how deforestation can be conserved. For example, in India students are being promoted to grow tree every year on their birthdays. So, they can understand the importance of that and help others saving trees. This might not directly help in preventing deforestation but it adds the value of responsibility in an individual.
In a nutshell, To save the existence of humans and earth global warming is the most crucial issue to focus on. While deforestation could be handled with public support and their responsibilities as it is resolvable and not affecting earth as global warming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is debatable that global warming is mos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21656050955 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07368895559 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53821656051 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2221238589 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277374021525 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905738548714 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776855328016 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174225348807 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092152439416 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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