Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crime of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. to what extend do you agree or disagree?
Every human has a right to leave in an environment that gives him/her a sort of security. At a same time, if a person feels insecure in their own country due to the incidents like theft, rape, murder, then it is a matter of serious concern. I support the capital punishment to control heinous crimes like rape and killing. Here, will discuss pros and cons of the same.
First of all, rape is the most horrendous crime which is increasing rapidly irrespective of strict laws and order in our nation. Every other day or say an alternate day,there are such reports we come across through news paper. In this scenario, it is natural to feel unsafe and this is the reason it is important to add a capital punishment. Though, this necessarily does not give a guarantee to lower the crime rate, but a criminal will think twice before harassing someone.
For example a country like Dubai, Iraq has a law which states if proven guilty, an offender is immediately put behind the bars and is given a death penalty immediately. Other gulf countries also follow same and that is why people feel safe upto much extent.
On the other side of story, there are many who will take disadvantage of situation and if the death penalty is made compulsory, then it may happen some innocent lives may get ruined in the absence of solid proof. There are chances people in power may misuse this law.
Though, it is equally true that if death penalty is made essential for murder and rape, people will be at much more ease. They won't have to fear about security of their loved ones.
In conclusion, I would say capital punishment is essential not to control violence, but to set an example as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, sort of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64333333333 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44406537465 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4923237161 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126269716149 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449899358219 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724279287442 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701877503189 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659514981507 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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