women sports are less popular do you think it's positive or negative development?
Since the dawn of civilization; women are deprived of basic rights, and they were confined in their homes and not allowed to participate in politics, economy and sports. Although, in modern world women are excelling in every aspect of life, but appreciation of their work, job or activities are less commendable as compared to men which are indeed detrimental for the society and the individual as well.
Firstly, It is impossible to yield fruitful result without confidence and social acceptance. To illustrate, women athlete with low esteem and little appreciation are not able to face the potential challenges as a result they end up with low scores. Furthermore, giving low priority to women sports is detrimental for the society as well. For instance, there is no charm and career progress for the young girls in the society hence playing sports would be there least priority.
Secondly, undermining the efforts of women athlete is provoking the idea of gender discrimination, of course which will lead to dire consequences. In other words, ,little appreciation of women sports will affect the women interest in every discipline of the country such as economy, politics and will stop them to participate equivalently to men as a result it will disrupt the economy of the country as most of the country population consists of large numbers of women.
To conclude, it is completely illogical that women are getting less appreciation merely on the basis of their gender. Secondly, it has dire consequences on the individual and on the nations as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'there the least'.
Suggestion: there the least
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, of course, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1171875 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9479431223 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53515625 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6798415392 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134528506952 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516371654333 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036925271359 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809087254876 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00858794992285 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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