Write about the following topic.
The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
there is no doubt that holidays plays a key role in boosting our energy. hence it is important to consider how to spend them effectively. While some people believe that the optimum way to plan a holiday is by not putting any plans at all, others argue that it have to be arranged previously in order to get better results. I completely agree with the later opinion for two reasons, which I will be discussing here.
First and foremost, the ignorance of setting a timetable for your holiday may result in wasting your time in many ways. First, if you are spending your vacation at home or at your city, there are enormous activities to do, and the decission making probably will take a long time. Additionally, if you are spending your time abroad, you may waste a lot of time in transport by not arranging your trip previously. To explain, you may decide to visit two far sightseeing, which are close to each other, hence you take the long distance twice either than arranging to visit both places at the same day. Moreover, if you are opting for spending your holiday in a tour, putting a plan for your movement could help you a great deal not only in saving time, but also in cost reduction too. For example, if your plan is to visit Paris, Amsterdam, and Rome by car, you should previously check the map and plan to move from those cities according to their locations, also you should arrange all places you want to visit inside every city individually.
Finally, not planning probably leads to missing important activities or places to visit in your holiday. To explain, a recent survey on trip Advisor, which is a web-site for booking trips, demonsentrated that the number of tourists who missed up visiting paramount places in their travels, had not planned their holidays before travelling.
In conclusion, I believe that not planning for holidays reduces their enjoyment. This is because with out that plan, a lot of time will be wasted in many ways and too many activities will be missed as mentioned previously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
there is no doubt that holidays plays a key r...
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Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...lays a key role in boosting our energy. hence it is important to consider how to spen...
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Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: hence,
...lays a key role in boosting our energy. hence it is important to consider how to spen...
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Line 13, column 98, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...educes their enjoyment. This is because with out that plan, a lot of time will be wasted...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74647887324 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57523030981 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543661971831 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9484728893 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.357142857 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316084461314 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114617451611 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626033727804 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170059359156 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702586876525 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.