Write about the following topic:
Some high school students work part-time in addition to going to school.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of high school students having
part-time jobs?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience
These time many teenagers are doing part time job with study. While, part time job offers certainly some benifits like financial stability and real life work exposure. At the same time the drawbacks of part time job can not be overlooked. In some cases it has seen that students who are doing part time job diverted from their actual life goal. I will going to compare side by side both advantages and disadvantages of part time job in my essay.
There is no denial in accepting the fact that work with study always teaches some good real life lessons and give a sense of financial freedom. For example, a student who is also working knows how to manage time effectively and how to deal with customers. Some times there are cases where parents are unable to pay high tution fee for studies, In such scenario part time jobs enables child to pay his/her tution by their own: that is how part time job pave a way to encourage education.
However, part time jobs offers good benifits but their are several drawbacks come along with them, like distraction towards studies, or complete drop out to study. A survay conducted on school dropouts in London reveals the 77 percent out of total dropouters are part time woker. Finanical liberty in early age can deviate teen towards bad habits like smoking and liquor consumption.
After analysing both arguments, It is not hard to find part time jobs carrying more advantages over drawbacks. These all drawbacks can be mitigate by introducing some ristriction or sprading awareness among children. For example, schools can provide counsling to part timers and make them undertstand how to best utilize money and time and thier primary focus ought to be on study.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
These time many teenagers are doing part time job with study. While, part time job of...
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Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... doing part time job with study. While, part time job offers certainly some benifits like...
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Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...sure. At the same time the drawbacks of part time job can not be overlooked. In some case...
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Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...it has seen that students who are doing part time job diverted from their actual life goa...
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Line 1, column 353, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...ted from their actual life goal. I will going to compare side by side both advantages...
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Line 1, column 420, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...de both advantages and disadvantages of part time job in my essay. There is no denial i...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ution fee for studies, In such scenario part time jobs enables child to pay his/her tutio...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...is/her tution by their own: that is how part time job pave a way to encourage education. ...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... way to encourage education. However, part time jobs offers good benifits but their are...
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Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...part time jobs offers good benifits but their are several drawbacks come along with t...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... 77 percent out of total dropouters are part time woker. Finanical liberty in early age c...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... both arguments, It is not hard to find part time jobs carrying more advantages over draw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82935153584 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43489945124 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576791808874 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3721906994 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.071428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291805780366 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107462090583 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560455887739 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174120651757 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520839499198 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.