Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.What is your opinion about this?
Some people are advocating the practice of keeping everything at appropriate place and in organized way whether it is your office or home. I am also agreeing on this and found this practice beneficial in various aspects of life, however, it is not something that must be followed rather than it is good to follow.
At first, placing things in right spot and segregate them properly can save a lot of time and effort, for example if we have designated spots for several useable stuffs at home like keys and documents it can be easily managed among several family memebers because any one can locate them at predefinied place. At workplace, keeping things tidy refelecting a good and positive impression on others and giving an abstract confidence while doing work.
On other hand, when things are not managed and in order it may land us in situation where we find ourself in sturggeling to spot an important stuff with at our home or office. it may cost us sometime badly in terms of money and efforts. For example, in the event of medical emergency if the previous medical reports are not placed in proper folder people may face hard time to find it or they may have to repeat the test in case of loss of reports. In addition to it, messy desk at workplace gives a negative vibe and it shows that person is not in decipline.
To conclude, it is advisable and good to have practice, of keeping everything tidy and organised it helps us to maintain positivity and decipline around us as well as it helps us to make our day to day chor quickly and efficiently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ay whether it is your office or home. I am also agreeing on this and found this practice benefic...
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Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun family seems to be countable; consider using: 'several families'.
Suggestion: several families
...ocuments it can be easily managed among several family memebers because any one can locate the...
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Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...d among several family memebers because any one can locate them at predefinied place. A...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...rtant stuff with at our home or office. it may cost us sometime badly in terms of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58214285714 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54754533716 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.705131262 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.555555556 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1111111111 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179146611491 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716748540782 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086795602236 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103274392027 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673705402579 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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