Write a letter to the Manager,as an employee, some suggestions for the development of hotel.
what are all the problems you think,
what are all the developments you recommend.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows
Dear Martin,
As you might aware, I am one of the oldest employee in this hotel and seen the hotel rising from two star to five star. This gives me a sense of satisfaction and feels privilege to be part of this adventures journey. In recent times, different problems surfaced and I would like to bring into your notice.
First of all, in last six month, attrition of employee at middle level has become very high, resulting, severe resource crunch in operation department. I recently heard that one customer clearly noticed it and mentioned in the feedback. Besides, we only offer limited styles of food at our restaurant which sometime does not meet the expectation of customer. In comparison to our hotel, others hotel in vicinity offers five time more varieties in break-fast and full course meal.
I believe that if these issues are continued then it may impact the hotel’s reputation. Therefore I recommend that employee at all levels require motivation and team building session. This will help the co-ordination among departments. For Food area, more chefs may be hired or existing chefs should be asked to get hands-on on international cousins that will help to achieve customers liking in food and beverage section.
I am sure these issues and recommendations will give some insight and help to resolve problems.
Yours sincerely,
Poonam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Martin, As you might aware, I am one of the olde...
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Line 4, column 93, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...may impact the hotel's reputation. Therefore I recommend that employee at all levels...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08482142857 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7701855126 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696428571429 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7158605059 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6153846154 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0995864320711 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316451790812 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276017596367 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0536543038415 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168429976421 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.