You are attending a part time course in a college. Due to some problem, you cannot continue your course. Write a letter to your teacher
- Describe the course
- Explain the problem
- Explain the reason for not continuing
- Tell the teacher about your future plans
Dear sir,
My name is raman, I am one of your students in the guitar class of evening session. I am writing this letter to inform you that I would not be able to pursue this course from next week.
I have enrolled in this course last month on september 2nd as a part time student. Also, I have had a job in the local hospital. Last week, my manager has announced my promotion as well as changed my all shifts to late evenings. Owing to this, it would be impossible for me to attend this course.
However, I am still willing to keep this course as I have great interest in learning this instrument. So, I would like to request you to transfer me to another session if there is any available in morning, which has same syllabus. I would prefer at 9 am with teacher Kim if she has space in her class.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Raman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, My name is raman, I am one of your stude...
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Line 6, column 65, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...course last month on september 2nd as a part time student. Also, I have had a job in the...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Raman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, still, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 167.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31137724551 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35299627872 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652694610778 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 506.74238477 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.415518477 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.4545454545 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157421414307 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620619874755 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456748160379 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881890591485 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035956658752 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 50.2224549098 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 12.4159519038 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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