You borrowed a book from the library and book is now damaged. Write a letter to librarian and in your letter
Write details about the book
Explain how it was damaged
Mention what you want to do about it
Dear Sir,
I am writing this Letter to bring into your kind notice that the book which I lend from your library has been damaged.
The tile of the book which I borrowed was Mathematical Modeling, volume no:4, published in year 2015 and written by William. Further, it was six edition of this book.
Last Sunday, I was preparing for my mathematics exam in my study room and referring this book. The moment, when I was in kitchen to have my meal, my young brother who is 5 years old entered in the study room and torn the few pages of the book in my absence.I was very much upset with this situation because I know as per policy I will have to return book in the original condition.
Therefore, I would appreciate if you could allow me to pay you the full fee incurred on purchasing new book. Hopefully, you would understand my situation and approve my request.
I look forward to hearing you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sara Batool
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 258, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...the few pages of the book in my absence.I was very much upset with this situation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56470588235 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46565333467 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658823529412 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.3251116529 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2222222222 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259515477297 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108947302425 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524115841139 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14575466589 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550919946358 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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