You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
• describe a news story in your country
• explain why people are interested in it
• say how the story personally relates to you
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you hale and hearty. I am aware that you are pretty much interested in current affairs, be it local or international. One political party in my country took the initiative of Billion Tree Tsunami Program (BTTP). Let me enlighten you about the goals and ambitions of the program. My country is one those who are facing environmental challenges. As a proactive measure, the party has initiated this project to battle with the pollution and forthcoming issues intact to it.
There are many cities where people are deprived of clean air and water. By planting trees we can bring drastic changes in our environment and weather. Owing to ozone layer destruction, weather is getting hotter every day and winter span has reduced to couple of months. Before commencing the project, the team had organized awareness roadshows across the country. Fortunately, people have responded very positively to this project and are taking part with great enthusiasm. They have understood the sheer importance and need of massive tree plantation.
I have been a core member of this project cross functional team and had conducted awareness session across the country. I personally feel accomplished and contented that in a way we are contributing to save the planet. Working on this program has been an emotional and amazing journey.
I would like to know your views about this achievement. Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Lene
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, Hope this letter finds you hale and hear...
^^^
Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce and need of massive tree plantation. I have been a core member of this projec...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...about this achievement. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Len...
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Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Lene
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78287171821 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679166666667 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6798273027 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.4444444444 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.05555555556 7.06120827912 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134237181804 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416309420584 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488935303216 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696535153104 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404126451252 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.