You heard that there is a group of people doing unpaid work helping old people in the local community. Write a letter to the group. In your letter you should,
• Tell how you heard about the group
• Confirm the importance of their work
• Give details of what you can do to help.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am an employee who works for an international NGO which concentrates on the elderly population. It is with high privilege to understand diverse activities about your services offers towards the older people as well as wish to join your group.
Recently, going through one of the famous magazines, my eyes got stuck on the page featured about your activities offered to geriatric civilians which was highly commendable and rewarding.
Services provided by you and your member act as an eye opener the for younger generations including me. Elder people must need more attention and affection from their relatives. However, they were unattended these days by their dear ones due to other priorities and commitments. The assistance provided by your team is a great relief for them to keep up their physical and mental wellbeing.
As an experience personnel in geriatric care, I would like to join the team during late evening hours and Sundays to extend my arms for to improve the needs those unattended people. My acquired skills and abilities in health management will be an added advantage and it could enable us to guide them to lead a healthy and independent life.
It would be great if an opportunity is <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">provided</span>to join your voluntary work.
Yours faithfully,
Sd-/
Name.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-01-18 | ELJOJEEVAN | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41203703704 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52321506726 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675925925926 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7727031205 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.272727273 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125816095256 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463777458126 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404475987909 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634096572507 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502573486267 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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