You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
it is argued that younger children are not spending enough time to read the newspapers or follow the news on TV. this essay agrees with this statement because kids today are using their cell phones a lot and they are addicted to the internet, social media and gaming apps on these.
With the recent growth and advancement in technology, there are a lot of companies in the market who are manufacturing mobile phones to attract the younger generation. While the use of mobile phone is important and necessary for emergencies, kids happened to take advantage of this and started creating the accounts in social media and other gaming apps. they spend most of their time playing games or trying to chat. they lack minimum awareness and have no clue what is happening in their country and around the world. I recently came across an article that said more than 60% of the kids have started using these social media and internet from the age of 12 in India.
I think it is important for the younger generation to be aware of the things going on around them and try to understand and analyze them as they are the future the country. it is parents and their teachers responsibility to teach them what is good and what is bad for them. parents should make some time out their busy schedules and try to watch the news channel or make their children read the newspaper everyday. schools and colleges should have a general awareness session twice a week so in addition the extra curricular activities so that kids can also cultivate the habit of listening to what others say and learn how to talk and present their ideas in front of the public.
In conclusion, conducting general awareness sessions in schools and colleges and parents making time to educate their children will not only try to put kids away from the internet,social media and learn about their surroundings, but will also distract their attention from the mobile phone usage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78931750742 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49708156751 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522255192878 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3908960956 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11749329856 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511345062603 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466382290636 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790112912393 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502470328561 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.