Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
– explain why you changed jobs
– describe your new job
– tell him/her your other news
Dear Lina,
I hope you and family are doing well. I am writing this letter to describe the recent developments in my career.
It's been a while we talked to each and I remember the last time we spoke, I did mention that I was going to switch to another job because of a better payscale and a lot more benefits compared to the previous one. After joining, I came to know that the company was a startup and was going to be acquired by a larger company soon. I was pretty upset and disappointed after hearing this news. Although I spent a lot of time to find this one, this was not the right one for me. So, I decided to look for a new job.
I joined Forest City Enterprises headquartered in Cleveland, Ohio and it is provides real estate management services. I not only got a chance to work on multiple technologies, but I am also a part of the larger team now. Everyone on my team are very helpful and encourage me to learn the new technologies and company's business in a shorter period of time. I can't tell you how happy and satisfied I am my current job because my manager is friendly and made it very easy for me.
well, it has been a while we saw each other. I am planning to visit you for the Memorial Day Weekend. Please let me know if you have anything planned during this time. if everything works out in the job, I will eventually plan and get married this year. I know you are pretty surprised to hear this. let me know your thoughts on this.
I would love to hear from you and hope to see you soon. Don't forget to write me back dear.
Yours lovingly,
Shruthi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the recent developments in my career. Its been a while we talked to each and I...
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Line 4, column 341, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...gies and companys business in a shorter period of time. I cant tell you how happy and satisfie...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 359, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...business in a shorter period of time. I cant tell you how happy and satisfied I am m...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Well
...riendly and made it very easy for me. well, it has been a while we saw each other....
^^^^
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...have anything planned during this time. if everything works out in the job, I will...
^^
Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
... you are pretty surprised to hear this. let me know your thoughts on this. I woul...
^^^
Line 6, column 58, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...ear from you and hope to see you soon. Dont forget to write me back dear. Yours...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 303.0 206.0 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23432343234 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42763896147 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567656765677 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 290.88556701 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3476042194 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.15 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.15 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166187423696 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537491843524 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501127698617 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852108548158 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295616637091 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.