You should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Competition and cooperation are two sides of the same coin, which is the most important thing to build in young people's minds as per their age. Some people say that, competition is a key to success of life, while other argue that, child should be taught how to cooperate with other can build a good society. In this essay, i will discuss both point of view and provide my own opinion.
Nowadays, competition is becoming very essential to be successful in every aspect of life. From personal growth to professional growth, without competing we can't reach on the top level. To get the first rank in class or to be a manager in office, all you have to compete with your classmates and colleagues. We have to teach our child that, to show your existence you have to be part of the competition which help them to get ready for the labour market. For example, the competition between different mobile brand in the market like, apple, samgsung, proves which one is best. Moreover, to be best in the market you have to update yourself.
On the other hand, young people who knows how to work in teams can make a society better place to live. It is most important to teach children, with cooperation nothing is impossible in life. For instance, in football, if player play for the personal glory they can loose but if they play coordinate with other players they can beat other team. Cooperation helps to boost your proficiency.
In conclusion, Competition and cooperation both play vital role in young people growth. Both should be taught to every child as per their age and capacity, which helps them to be success in the life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ofessional growth, without competing we cant reach on the top level. To get the firs...
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71777003484 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52829656186 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543554006969 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2208769702 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161975120149 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540784570938 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368640298971 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100783662837 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248070993117 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.