Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past. Causes and solutions.
There are many reasons why modern society shows the disrespect and discourtesy to older people. In this essay, I will consider the main reasons and possible solutions to deal with this problem.
let us start with reasons that create the problem with the disrespectful behavior of younger generation. The first reason is that they usually stop following traditions. Youngsters tend to refuse following the tradition of being respectful for older people, since they think that they are both more intelligent and aware of the modern world. Another factor is that they are fascinated in the Internet. Growing generations find the virtual world more interesting than national customs, but it does not teach them to regard older population, because it is more oriented on modern society.
However, some politicians suggest suggest the following solutions to handle this problem. Firstly, to deal with this problem, parents should teach children to respect older generation. Parents should take larger responsibility for teaching their children to show more respect to older member of society, as children usually listen to both parental advice and lessons. Secondly, the government also can launch cultural programs for young people. Authorities should boost cultural awareness in the country by arranging various social occasions, since it has sufficient finances as well as administrative resources to organize such expensive events.
In conclusion, even though there are many reasons that influence young people to stop from being polite and respectful, I think that it is possible to address this complication with the above mentioned solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55952380952 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77099796197 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3856129368 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.769230769 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103573271898 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032494672919 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502550722541 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705947301907 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652547805978 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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