Youngsters nowadays prefer to live on their own and leave their families. Is this a positive or a negative development?
Today’s young people are ambition to live alone away from the control of their families. It is beneficial for anyone to dream of starting a personal life and depend only on himself taking the responsibilities for his own life, but is it advantageous for every one? Or the idea can contain some disadvantages as well.
During our childhood, we have been dreaming about the day that we will become an independent personality and act like father or mother.
On one hand, this need may become the motivation for a personality that likes to be a value added to the society. This would be a starting point for such person to create a successful life. On the other hand, there another type of people who wants to live without any supervision in order to create an irresponsible way of life that usually ends by a crisis. For example, according to an article which was published in New York time in, 2003 that 30% of teenagers who prefer to leave their families and live alone have no future plans to execute in the future. This shows that supervision should not be removed form children life until they are fully aware about how they can be responsible and productive. This unplanned freedom will result in an increase in youth crimes number, referring to the same article published on Alexandria University Wall Magazine in 1999.
At the end, it highly recommended to prepare our youth for such transition in their life as well as teach them the meaning of responsibility in order to have the benefit of their ambition in our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 23, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended preparing'.
Suggestion: recommended preparing
...agazine in 1999. At the end, it highly recommended to prepare our youth for such transition in their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74253731343 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74601262191 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600746268657 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8991709585 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.545454545 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156213057919 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569914292721 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574646368767 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856059351197 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495683403332 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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