In 20 years there will be less pollution in the air than there is today.
I would disagree with the statement that in next 20 years, there will be less pollution in the air than today. Population growth, building infrastructure from building roads to building industries will have a major contribution in increasing pollution in the upcoming years.
The population of the world is going to increase in the upcoming years. And hence to meet the basic needs of the large number of people, it require utilisation of large number of natural resources. For example, population of country like India, is continuously growing, now to meet the daily requirement, more transportation will be required. To clothing demanda, more textile factories need to be setup and there are countless number of small requirements which will add up to the pollution index of the nation.
Secondly, the standard of living of the people all over the world is increasing day by day. Nowadays, all the commercial building are setup with an air conditioning system. And also number of commercial spaces is sky rocketing day by day. People tend to buy heaters, air conditioners, cars and many electronic devices to make their life more comfortable. Hence, the amount of electricity usage will be increasing and production of electricity also contributes to the pollution in the air.
In this world of technologies, cities are getting urbanized. Hence, there is developement of new building, concrete roads, new public transprt facilities and all together will be requiring more energy. Production of raw material of concrete and other fundamental product will produce large amount of the pollution in the upcoming years. However, the world is developing technology that must be energy efficient and more enviornmental friendly, however it seems to be difficult to implement those and replace the current system in the short span of the next twenty years.
In conclusion, it seems that the pollution will be increasing in the upcoming years as the population will increase, urbanization of the cities, and industilisation to meet the need to the growing population. All the above factors will lead to usage of more energy and subsequently leading to more pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'requires'?
Suggestion: requires
...needs of the large number of people, it require utilisation of large number of natural ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 43.0788530466 23% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26224783862 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04755281678 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49855907781 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0129923881 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.411764706 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335291247057 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100287024101 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1352760461 0.0737576698707 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186787452176 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987814017147 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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