Everyone at least once in a lifetime are in certain situation when they have to take important decisions. While, taking these decisions, I personally believe that they should consider others opinion before taking these important decisions all by themselves. People cannot think clear in certain situations, sometimes they are inexperienced in that particular field which requires to make them decisions. I will elaborate these points further in the paragraphs below.
To begin with, sometimes people are biased with the situation. They cannot see clearly the pro's and con's of the situation that requiring them to make decisions. So, in that case it is always helpful to seek advice from others and make a informed decision. For instance, few years ago when me and my husband where in market to bu a house, after viewing several properties we found our dream home. We were about to finalize the deal and was going to pay from our lifetime savings for that quaint and beautiful house, we decided to consult our uncle who was working in the field of real estate from several years. Even though, on first sight he liked the perfectly manicured house, his keen eyesight revealed some hidden problems in walls and electrical fittings which could have cost us an elephant. Thus, we were very fortunate to consult him before taking this important decision to buy that perfectly looking home which we would have regretted later.
Furthermore, people can also get a different perspective from the experience of others, which can help them in taking informed decisions. Sometimes we cannot afford to take these important decisions without any help. For example, when we take admission in the university and need to decide our majors, we should take help of the academic counselor before making any final decision regarding the which field to choose, which subjects can fulfill our requirements or which subjects we can couple together and so on. If we do not take his advice and decide on our own we might have to face lot of trouble which can cost our grades and affect our career. All of my friends always keep contact with their academic advisors and take benefit of his experience.
Finally, some people might argue that people should be capable of taking important decisions alone, which will make them responsible and competent. They will become capable facing good and bad consequences of their own decisions. I will still argue that if you can get some help from others in taking life changing decisions you should avail it. It will save lot of time and prevent discouragement in future. It will also help to keep your confidence intact. Because some decisions might not be reversible and make you vulnerable if done something wrong.
To wrap up, I will conclude that although it is good to take decisions alone, but when taking important decisions people should consider others experience and perspective and make a informed decision.
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- TOEFL T P O 13 Integrated Writing Task 42
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 381, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
...in that particular field which requires to make them decisions. I will elaborate these ...
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Line 1, column 434, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...decisions. I will elaborate these points further in the paragraphs below. To b...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ful to seek advice from others and make a informed decision. For instance, few ye...
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Line 7, column 399, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... lot of time and prevent discouragement in future. It will also help to keep your confide...
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Line 9, column 181, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ers experience and perspective and make a informed decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, still, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 27.0 9.8082437276 275% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2456.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02249488753 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57045859986 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490797546012 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 771.3 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9689000821 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.782608696 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2608695652 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86956521739 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131358708417 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456168752257 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430883373961 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932266212696 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395193455376 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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