In achieving personal happiness, our relationships with family, friends, and colleagues are more important than work and wealth. Do you agree or disagree with this?
You have long been friends with someone. If they do
something that you don’t like, should you still be friends
with him or her?
Since the beginning of time, human beings strive to communicate with each other.
Throughout history, friendship has played a prominent role in people’s personal life.
In essence, man needs to communicate and the best of relationship is being with someone who is special. Thus, friendship has an important impact on human life.
I personally believe that a long friendship is valuable, so I agree with the above sentences which means we should befriend with her/him
I will explicate my point of view in 2 following paragraph.
First and foremost, the most important prerequisite for adultsent is trying to solve the problems not running away from them.
friendship problems are permanent and it will be solved just with relaxation and forgiveness. Every relationship needs both.
As a personal experience, when I was in middle school I have fought with one of the best friends of mine, in that time we broke up our friendship and didn’t talk to each other for two years.
Now I regretted and realized we could be adults and just talked to each other and solved the problems.
The second reason that I would like to bring here that all friend have things in common and opposite things and this differents made all friendships beautiful. but a sudden change in ethics is bad behavior.
if a friend of mine, suddenly but for a long time doing something that I don’t like.
In the first step, I must be clear and ask myself which is not this my fault or mistaken or my impatience?
In the second step, if it was her/him problems I will talk with her and I will try to eliminate the problem.
In the third step, if there wasn’t any other way and if I wouldn’t be happy anymore and this friendship became my life problem, I will end it up.
To wrap it up, I believe friendship is very valuable and need patient and sacrificed but also need happiness and joy. so if we have a problem in our relationship we have to try so hard to fix it and throwing it must definitely be the last thing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'paragraph' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'paragraphs'.
Suggestion: paragraphs
...plicate my point of view in 2 following paragraph. First and foremost, the most import...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Friendship
...problems not running away from them. friendship problems are permanent and it will be s...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ferents made all friendships beautiful. but a sudden change in ethics is bad behavi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...en change in ethics is bad behavior. if a friend of mine, suddenly but for a lo...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I will try to eliminate the problem. In the third step, if there wasn't an...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ificed but also need happiness and joy. so if we have a problem in our relationshi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77464788732 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78016039235 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52676056338 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6087587591 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1666666667 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.53405017921 331% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191878356099 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061722710369 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501248412336 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070767711955 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560993988882 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.