A/D: The most important thing people learned is from families.
Family plays an important role in people's life. However, people hold different opinions on whether the most significant thing people learned is from families. As far as I'm concerned, I disagree with the statement for the following reasons.
To start with, knowledge is one of the most essential things people learned and teachers are those who teach them to gain a great deal of knowledge. To further elaborate, people learned a lot of academic subjects from junior high school to university, and they learn every knowledgeable thing from teachers and professors not from their families. For example, I had trouble learning math when I was in junior high school. It was my math teacher that taught me after class everyday so that I started to love math and got exceptional grades afterwards. Thus, I contend that when it comes to the most important thing in life, knowledge, teachers are always the ones who help us to grow.
In addition, social skill is regarded as the most indispensable thing that people need to learn about, and friends are always the good partners who teach us how to communicate with others. That is to say, when making friends, we learn about how to chat with people properly, how to make others like us by mimicking our friends and our friends will always remind us to be better. Take my university friend, Julie, as an example. She was good at socializing and communication, also, she had a bunch of friends. Therefore, she often taught how to make friends and how to deal with people appropriately.
Last but not least, mental health is the most necessary thing that a person needs to learn about, and books are always our best mentors. To clarify this point, there are many books, magazines which tell people how to be happy and how to relax. We learn how to become happier from the from books not from our families. For instance, I felt painful when preparing the final graduation exam last year, so I bought a mental health tutorial to recognize my problems. On the other hand, my parents didn't give me any practical advice to release my pressure. Consequently, I think the most important thing we learned is not from our families but books.
For those aforementioned reasons, though family do teach us many lessons, I truly believe the most important thing we learned is not from families, we learn from teachers, friends and books.
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- TOEFL T P O 24 - Integrated Writing Task 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, to start with, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82843137255 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61922549165 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.259053168 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.503477492769 0.236089414692 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161302649217 0.076458572812 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164968225875 0.0737576698707 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341299493013 0.150856017488 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113788056516 0.0645574589148 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.