advertisements seem more attractive than they are
The advertisement industry serves both customers and producers. Despite beneficial to society, it deviates from its original goal. Adverts play an important role to aware the society about new technologies and products. Although the merits of the commercials are superficial, demerits have outweighed them. I believe that advertisements always seem attractive than they actually are. I feel this way because of the few reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, advertisers make it more attractive to the customers while they are not actually attractive or give satisfaction to the customers. They deceive the customers by using various tactics. For example, for the advertisement of sunscreen, they introduce it as high protection against the ultraviolet rays. Also, introduce seasonal sunscreen like winter cream. Eventually, they never work as they show in the advertisement. However, some customers check the products online and read the reviews of it, but all customers do have not efficiency to confirm it in several ways.
The second and the same exquisite proof for this assertion is they use different types of media which are the choice of the customers. For example, if products are related to the children, then they give an advertisement in Disney’s channels. Sometimes, they give adverts by a famous personality. For example, for the advertisement of a toothbrush, 'cricket player says that for playing the game you have to be the flexible as flexible toothbrush', so fans more attract towards the toothbrush.
Finally, in contrast, advertisements give us knowledge about the usage of the product. For example, I had bought an electric roster online, but I did not know how to use it. When I saw the advertisement about it on the social network, I came to know how to use it. Furthermore, they are not always distracting if we find its advantages by searching online or take reviews from others. People should check the product’s qualities before by it and not influenced by them.
By the way of conclusion, adverts are really attractive for the customers but they not really are and various media which influenced the customers to buy their products.
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...d the customers to buy their products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, so, then, while, for example, i feel, in contrast, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24507042254 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08430766608 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529577464789 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2431596001 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6363636364 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1363636364 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334457173726 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093391689022 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124055314856 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171962070208 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712503232792 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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