tour guide trip is better
Traveling is the best way to explore our selves around the world. Generally, people like to travel in a group of family or friends. Although the plethora of people hold the opinion that tour without tour guide gives privacy, I think that trip with the guide would be the best trip ever. I feel this way because of a few reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, with the company of guide man people can explore the world in a subtle way. People are always curious to know about the world's history. Since the world is very large and having information about the whole world is impossible, people need the help of the tour guide. For example, a group of people wants to visit Udaipur city which is situated in Rajasthan. There are many forts and heritage indicates the history of the city. If a group of people wants to know about their culture, religion, heritage, and language, they will know about it from tour guides.
The second and the same exquisite reason for this assertion is to make an easy trip due to having guidance from the people who belong to particular that area. In most of the tour, almost local people are tour guide over there. Therefore, they have information about that area since they were offspring. They have experienced the environment of the place, so they know more about that place than anybody can search it from the internet, Additionally, they have already fixed our rooms and eating arrangements. For example, when I had visited Mount Abu with my family, we had hired a tour guide on our whole trip. We had already visited that are many times but we did not aware about their miniature history. That is why it was our best trip ever. It was our easer trip because that person had shown us some places which unknown to us. We had never been there as we had visited Mount Abu many times.
However, travel alone has its own advantages. People can select their hotels and other accommodation. They have the independence to choose their own choice. People can travel when they want. For instance, in the tour trips, people have to travel according to the tour guide. So, sometimes people feel stifling. Though traveling with tour guide has demerits, advantages of that overweighted the disadvantages.
In a nutshell, based on the above-mentioned arguments, I think that having a tour guide in the trip makes the trip easier since people do not have to worry about the places which they should visit and get more information about the history and importance of the places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71235955056 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42124377365 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467415730337 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.7139445036 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6666666667 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4814814815 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85185185185 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246016906828 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739153520913 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110503581215 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171324032321 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629842620054 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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