Agree or disagree: The advertisements today are less honest than in the past
In such an economy-oriented society, it is vastly acknowledged that the main pursuit of almost all industry and trade is profit. It seems like everyone in nowadays is chasing only after money, including the advertisers. So it is not surprising that many people hold the opinion that advertisements, in order to gain bigger profit, becomes less honest than the advertisements in the past. However, as far as I am concerned, this is not true for reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
One of the biggest factors in modern society for advertisements to remain honest is the widespread use of the internet. The invention and the diffusion of the Internet has changed people’s life dramatically, not only innovating the way we obtain knowledge but also providing us with abundant resources to discern and determine about certain things, which affects our choices of buying enormously as well. Therefore there is no need for the advertisers to use dishonest ads to cheat the customers for it will not work out well. For example, every day when we surf online, we receive hundreds of millions of feed from numerous social media platforms, many of which include advertisements. But instead of putting our entire trust in the advertisements we see like how we may react to them in the past, we now have more choices other than that. One simplest way is to search it online and a huge amount of information will be at your disposal in the blink of an eye, allowing you to view the product in a completely comprehensive way. The proliferating video streaming industry also plays a vital role in it. Whenever you are confused about a certain product, you can learn about the real attributes in testing videos many vloggers make.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...trade is profit. It seems like everyone in nowadays is chasing only after money, including ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...r choices of buying enormously as well. Therefore there is no need for the advertisers to...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89830508475 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95709819951 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630508474576 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1264215496 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.416666667 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130011491878 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463688412953 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827217061291 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113650744473 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334503273834 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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