Agree or disagree: people nowadays spend much more time than they should use text messages and new technologies such as social media to communicate with each other.
Throughout history, communication has played a prominent role in all societies. Due to its paramount importance to peoples ‘relationships. Someone may hold the view that it stimulates people to contact with each other more. However, some other may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that people should not spend more time on social media. In my perspective, I firmly believe that social media has lots of benefits and if people can manage their time, it will help people to be more social active than before. In the following paragraphs, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that new technology such as cell phone, lab top, tablets, and the internet encourage people to be more social active. Although this matter may have some disadvantages, for instance, one spend more time on it. I believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks. Take a personal experience as an example I can contact with many friends around the worlds with social media. Although I leave alone in a city with my husband and child, I never feel alone due to new technologies which may not be available before. Therefore, I believe that new technologies open new worlds and people can be more active in social even though they virtual worlds.
Another north worthy point in support my opinion is that there is a link between social media usage and social well-being. To illustrate, I would like to mention some available statistics about this issue. The result of a survey conducted recently in our country reveals that the more people become social active the better they have social health. One way for people to be social active is using social media. They try to communicate with other people, even though they do not familiar with each other. In this survey more than 56 % of Iranian people who use the internet have better social well-being, social capital, and better mental health status. Therefore the results can easily support the statement mentioned above.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first one which crosses the mind at first glance, they are by no means the only reasons available. Actually, there is another subtle point which must be bored in mind is that social media cause people to achieve more information, therefore one who uses this kind of technologies have a better knowledge ,attitude , and practice in their life. The result of a study conducted in my country indicates that the people who use social media have the better quality of life. They try to find the better ways to increase their knowledge and increase their life satisfaction. In the aforementioned study, one of the items that explicate is the existence of the linkage between quality of life and life satisfaction and level of social relationship with new technologies. It is confirmed that the better have people access to this kind of technologies the more they can solve their challenge in their life.
Taking all the aforementioned into account, it can conclude that social media is not a bad event in our life. Although some people may think that it may waste our time, but recent research show the benefit of these new technologies. Consequently, it is highly recommended that scientist does further studies to show the latent beneficial effect of them.
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- Agree or disagree: people nowadays spend much more time than they should use text messages and new technologies such as social media to communicate with each other. 76
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for instance', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225328947368 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.144736842105 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125 0.0866891130778 144% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0411184210526 0.046263068375 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0608552631579 0.0685040099705 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116776315789 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0148026315789 0.0351676179071 42% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.74912910914 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263157894737 0.0309702414327 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0953947368421 0.0887237588012 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0279605263158 0.0209618222197 133% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0115131578947 0.0139019557991 83% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3314.0 2387.08602151 139% => OK
No of words: 553.0 408.028673835 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99276672694 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84932490483 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374321880651 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235081374322 0.251872472559 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157323688969 0.174417080927 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112115732369 0.112833075102 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74912910914 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446654611212 0.524397521467 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.579902011 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 19.75 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1493336428 48.84282405 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.357142857 120.699889404 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.464285714286 0.644075263715 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 43.2581374322 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.44666666667 1.45489161554 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269211673923 0.300154397459 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0975526059136 0.103427244359 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0762234964149 0.0752933317313 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.463724549594 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14945027617 0.151897553556 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101131452902 0.114077575197 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729903482189 0.0781384742642 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.42877435486 0.336927656856 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0505584333667 0.067059652881 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194228555138 0.210909579961 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076150666299 0.0618886996521 123% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8870967742 193% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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