ALWAYS TELLING THE TRUTH IS THE MOST IMPORTANT CONSIDERATION IN ANY RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN PEOPLE
Truthfullness is the most important facts for all kinds of relationship between two individuals. Personallay I believe that, truth is the most promonant factor among peoples. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, Stick to truth is necessary for gain trust for any cordial relationship and it helps increasing commitment among individuals. Wheneve someone expected to gain trust then always telling the truth is the fisrt dominant matter. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was at class nine, I needed some supervisation about my failing of education. And I told my problems about the failing in mathmatics subject to my class teacher Mr. Khalil, and told him to help me to recover my failure without notify my parents. Then Mr. Khalil give me some suggestion about how to improve in mathmatics and after next exam I was finally passed in mathmatics subjects. And because of Mr. Khalil trust and intensive supervisation untill now I keep a warm relationship with him.
Secondly, Truth is very essential for keep improving relationship bonding. When 2 peoples are trust each other and every time they keep honest each other their bonding keep increasing. For instance, When i was little about ten years old, one of my best friend is nazmul from my chilhood. Every time we are very honest each other and no one never ever lying to each other for every matter. If he trusted me for keeping his money, toy, stationaty things etc to burrowed to me and every time I just take back to him. And that way we were always keep honest each other untill to present. Additionally, even though I and Nazmul also keep our relationship with the telling truth everytime.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that, keep the honest commitment with each other between two man is the always first priority for better relation. This is because, gain trust to each other and hold improving cordial relationship bonding with each other
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- TPO 24 Integrated TOEFL Writing 71
- TPO 24 Integrated TOEFL Writing(R) 73
- ALWAYS TELLING THE TRUTH IS THE MOST IMPORTANT CONSIDERATION IN ANY RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN PEOPLE 60
- For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to increase' or 'increase'.
Suggestion: to increase; increase
...r any cordial relationship and it helps increasing commitment among individuals. Wheneve s...
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Line 2, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rt dominant matter. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ing keep increasing. For instance, When i was little about ten years old, one of ...
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Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'kept'.
Suggestion: kept
...ack to him. And that way we were always keep honest each other untill to present. Ad...
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Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mmitment with each other between two man is the always first priority for better ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86176470588 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70660316486 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508823529412 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6669672943 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.0 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8947368421 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176301334757 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618545124332 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700951521488 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112200117467 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451806562934 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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