the books should not be banned.
Over the arc of history, there was always a period of time, filled with battles over lands and resources, most of the time ended in considerable blood-shed, men slaughtered and people taken as slaves. These are the facts that are denied mostly by the occupant countries that attacked the defend-less lands, yet they will always try to represent themselves as messengers of the gods of all sorts to make people believe in them so that they won't rise rebels opposing them. The books containing the truth about their true nature is more likely to get banned as they contain the truth behind the power and therefore should not be published in the idea of governments. All the books that get published are mainly made by the regime as they have the authority, power and resources to do so, whereas writer with different ideas are sometimes murdered and hanged due to betrayal.
On the other hand there are also lots of books which contain pornography, violent scenes and scientific sexual facts that should be banned as they might transfer a negative signal to children’s minds. These supposedly unimportant books which are accessible in most of supermarkets and stores have been proven to have a vital effect on children behavior in the future. A study showed that a considerable portion of criminals are criminals as a result of exposing to banned resources in their childhood.
As for me, I tend to believe the books should not be comprehensively banned. i.e. particular age ranges should have no access to forbidden books that are not suitable for them. instead, they should be given the proper resources to study from, or play with rather than the facts that might hurt their very clean subconscious, engaging their minds with dirty truths behind their own government ideas, history or what their parents do to make babies, even if it looks perfectly normal from others’ perspectives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... the arc of history, there was always a period of time, filled with battles over lands and res...
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Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the supermarkets') or simply say ''most supermarkets''.
Suggestion: most of the supermarkets; most supermarkets
...important books which are accessible in most of supermarkets and stores have been proven to have a v...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Instead
...n books that are not suitable for them. instead, they should be given the proper resour...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, whereas, as for, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9465408805 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.662110814 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572327044025 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3022129675 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.3 100.406767564 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313758614365 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139128846904 0.076458572812 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125565598441 0.0737576698707 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221913527654 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534125399497 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 11.7677419355 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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