Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Hiring employee is a difficult process for businesses and therefore, it should be choosen carefully. Some probably prefer to hire the employee for their entire lives. However, in my opinion it is not a good idea for companies to recruit people for lifetime. This is because, it will affect the work quality of the company. Additionally, it will have negative influence on the health of employees.
To begin with, signing the lifetime contract with an employee will affect the qaulity of company. When people know they have security of job for the entire life, they probably become linent and deliquent to their work. Even though company had hired the most intelligent and devotee person. For instance, my cousin hire people on a year basis contract for his company. if his businesses goes well with and person put good efforts in the work he renews his contract for an other year. this is the reason, his company work qaulity is very high and every client leave good remarks to it. therefore, I strongly believe that businesses should not hire employee for their entire lives.
In addition, working at one place will have negative influence on the person mental health. Working everyday in the same enviroment with same people it will diminish the power of thinking and learning, specially in young people. Research study shows that the, a person need change in their enviroment to keep up well for the mental and physical health. If person sign a life time contract and also the company is very strict to the rule, the employee might become mentally ill. As, some people came under pressure and they were not able to perform well. This will have negative influence on both the employee and the company in long run. As a consequence, I disagree that lifetime contract with the employee.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89180327869 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42957235375 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504918032787 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4596187165 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.5263157895 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0526315789 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196293066111 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729918563883 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887558935777 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155567448254 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721675875925 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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