Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote.
I think that one of the most important thing is election power of demcracy in this modern society.To get power of election for children over the age of 15 is not great discision as long as they are brilliant than other nomal adults.Simliary, most of them are not activiating of work or any labor that cause they don't know which president will be good.For example, most of president,they have to say that making job, making a opportunity something like that, we admired of them.In contrast Children over the age of 15 are not attracted them because they 're not worker,so they don't think too much about money.
Also we think that they do a lot of mistake their desicion.So, they have their election of classmate, that is good for society after their growing.For instans, their classmate is small society, although they 're representive of classmate and seems to be adult.But i think that even classmate will be corruption It's fine to back work. But big society, our society lose our job,and bad outcome along with us.Remember, they also get to the election power over the age of 18.Why don't we make earlier, i just think they have to mistake their discision,and they need to get more responsible mind to remind after than they don't late too get to elect. Agian i want to mention that what brings us to get young guy election, it brings more complex opinion.For example, when i was young, i have elction of class, the elction representive want to buy hambergur, cola, food, and otherwise that provides that they gave me the bribe something like that. But i don't know that was bribe,so i want to select him twice.So, when people are young,they will cause bad happening although they think it was right. which mean is worst of thing.Because bribe in eletction, is a part that it was not right!.
I think still that the patience is important key of children first wait over the age of 18
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, still, for example, i think, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67168674699 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66420898353 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506024096386 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.1344086022 233% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.465220779 48.9658058833 344% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 221.571428571 100.406767564 221% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.4285714286 20.6045352989 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 5.5376344086 614% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122585218993 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646794674494 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770542887285 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135071151101 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680289145287 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.3 11.7677419355 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.1575268817 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 10.002688172 560% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.0537634409 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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